Hi!My name is Rami Goto.I'm fromNorth- East of Japan, and I'm 20 years old now.I've been here for about 3 months, and I will stay here until middle of October.
I love my friend, family, and travel!!So,it is perfect for me to go to foreign country with them!!
I want to enjoy my life in nanaimo with you!!
This looks good for a start Rami. Can you please add some visuals and some gadgets? A blog is somewhat formal, so don't use words like 'wanna' and 'you guys'. (This is okay in comments, though.)
ReplyDeleteYou only have one post in your blog so far. Your classmates have between 4 and 7 posts. It is hard for me to give you feedback if there is litle to read.
ReplyDeleteThere are 7 errors in this short post. Can you find and fix them?
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